Wednesday, 26 October 2016

If I were A.

If I Were A … Lamborghini Veneno I would have that grumbling sound and the purple and black paint job and be the best car ever.
I would be the thing everyone stares at. I would be one of the most rare objects in the world. I would be best.

If I were a nutcracker I would be cracking nuts all day. I would be the one in the right place all day every day. I would be the one with a big  mustache and the red and yellow painted body . I would be the perfect tool for sophisticated squirrel.

Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Arriving at kingston

I have a photograph. It was taken on a camera in the chessington tomb blaster in England. A photo of us - Mum, Dad Evan, Harry, Grandad, Nanny and me. I am little, about ten. There we are, sitting in the cart holding our laser guns shooting the targets on snakes and beasts. We had travelled down by car from my Nanny and Grandads house, sitting on the seats in my Nanny’s car looking out the windows to see the most busy road in the U.K slip by. In front of us is a busy line, with people waiting to go on the Chessington tomb blaster at the end of the ride. On either side of us is targets to shoot. And behind is a corner from the snakes.  

Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Palindrome Poem

Speech to speaking
Inspirational and funny
Speaking to speech
Funny and inspirational


Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Highland Home Photographs

  • I am feeling my tummy rolling round because I am a tiny bit nervous.

  • I can see the difficult wall I am about climb next.

  • I can hear Louie saying “I want to come down, I want to come down.”

  • I can smell a rubbery smell.

  • I am feeling the cold wet rocks as I walk in the cave

  • I can see cave wetas crawling round and the koura in the water.

  • I can  hear just the stream water and all the other kids chatting.

  • I can smell nothing really because we are in a cave.

  • I am feeling surprised about how high Tom’s score is.

  • I can see all the shots on the target.

  • I can  hear the gunshots in the background.

  • I can smell the gunpowder of the other guns.

  • I am feeling amazed from the sculpture.

  • I can see the giant whatonga sculpture.

  • I can  hear everyone talking.

  • I can smell all the nature around me.

  • I am feeling like I want another turn.

  • I can see tiny  animals.

  • I can  hear the rapids of the river.

  • I can smell little fish.

Wednesday, 6 April 2016

Sentence types

Opener Sentences.
As we were at the river, we were being bitten to pieces.
As Soon as I entered the cave, I saw wetas.
Before we went caving, I was a tiny bit nervous.
After we went caving, I wanted to do it again.
Although the windmills looked small from a distance, they were actually giant.
Serial Sentences.
Louie bowled, Alex hit and I caught.
The morning runs were tiring, dark and long.
The trampolines were big, bouncy and fun.
The cabins were littered with dirty clothes, bags and pillows.
The cave is fun, dark and wet.
Interruptor sentence
Alex and I saw bees, flying fast, we ran away.
I bowled, Louie swung, The ball hit the wicket.
I ate breakfast, fast, it was yummy.

Thursday, 24 September 2015

quick write optimist yachting

“AHHH!!!,” I scream as my buddy and I are heading to the rocks .
“We’re gonna crash into the rock,” we both cry. It was dangerous.  The weather was wrong on the news. It said it would be sunny today but the weather has changed to be terrible.
“I'm scared,”   my buddy and I say at the same time. “We should try control the yacht to safety,” I said.  I feel scared. It was a horrible day.
I wonder if we survive,  or will we lose? I’m not sure.
The danger was still on and I see the rocks coming closer by the second.
I hear my buddy trying to move the sail around. I am trying to pull the rudder to the side but it is stuck! I have an idea of how to turn away from the rocks! I pull the rudder out, then put it back in and it worked.
“Pull the sail round,” I shout. And finally we turn round and sail away from the rocks. “HOORAY, NOOO,” my buddy and I  shout.
We got away from the rocks but there was one problem,
The boat got a rock stuck in the bottom!
“We might have to jump out,” I call The boat is not moving!
“On the count of 3, jump!  Ready 1, 2, 3, jump!
The water is freezing it feels like cold ice!
It is so cold!  My buddy and I swim to the shore quickly and stay there relived. THE END!!!!!